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As you lie sound asleep tonight
I hope you realize everything will be alright.
Though it may not happen as soon as you’d like,
Our bond shall remain forever tight.
As I lie under this beautiful moon
I dream about the moment I will see you soon.
And I know you stare at the bright moon too . . .
Oh baby if you only knew
How much I love you, it’s true.
- by Trapped_in_ice |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: My Bright Moon
- Artist: Trapped_in_ice
- Description: I don't know what else to say. The poem says it all. I just hope you like it as much as I do.
- Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Its_a_Kiki_thing - 07/21/2008
- i think it is a beautiful peice of poetry about love 4/5
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- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
- The concept of this poem is not particurally origional, but it's done pretty well, considering. I like the rhyming of 'tonight' and 'alright'... it's always good when you can get longer words to rhyme.
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- reapersuns manfriend - 07/21/2008
- The last 2 lines seemed forced. The rest of it was enjoyable though.
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