-
We're at it again
We're lovers again
We're sitting again
We're talking again
We're laughing again
Yet I wonder...
Why again
Why do we continue to do this
Why
Why
Why
In Love Again
I don't understand
I love him...
I want to believe
I think I believe
I know I believe
I LOVE HIM
and i always will...
- by IwillPOVERTIZEyou |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
- Skip
- Title: We're at it again!!
- Artist: IwillPOVERTIZEyou
- Description: About My love with my Boyfriend!
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: love boyfriend
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- IwillPOVERTIZEyou - 11/01/2008
-
im not a poet i was bored and wrote a poem
i kno its crap yet i dont kare
we broke up anyway so does it matter
not at all! - Report As Spam
- Atheshya - 07/21/2008
- Unorigional. My suggustion: use metaphors. Don't use th same word over and over. It IS possible to write good poetry about love, but this isn't it. Just sayng that what you're feeling is love doesn't tell us anything, try comparing it to something, or give an example of how this love plays out in conversations. Anything but what you did.
- Report As Spam
- reapersuns manfriend - 07/20/2008
- That's all great, but I don't see how this can be poetry. Once again, I feel poetry is spammed with the over emotionals. Not particularly talking about you, because sometimes I write "emo" poetry. Doesn't work though. Mainly, this poem will not benefit us by reading it. Only yourself.
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
