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Dragon’s fire
Strong and loving
Keeps her from the deathly stare
Of the other one who loves her
Though he hides himself in fear
He too loves that
Broken phoenix
Though she cannot shed a tear
Helplessly she begs for peace
Crippled by her still-dry eyes
She cannot heal their jealous anger
She can’t prevent
The coming fight
Naught to do
But sit and wait
Wait and see
Whose move is first
Pray she can prevent the worst
The more she waits
The worse it hurts
- by queenofinsanity6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Phoenix
- Artist: queenofinsanity6
- Description: Written when my lover and I first fell for each other. I was at the time dating another guy, who had deep feelings for me, but refused to show any feeling at all. It always put me off guard. It turned nasty when I finally made my choice. This poem was written just before I chose who I'm with now
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: brokenphoenix dragon phoenix torn
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Comments (6 Comments)
- METRO SKiiES - 06/07/2009
- Wow... that's really all I have to say... you can write!
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- NefariousShark - 07/20/2008
- I like how it relates to u but in a .... what's that word ...o well let just say in a bigger way. anyhow this was a nice poem . ^^
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- arachna8itch - 07/19/2008
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It's very well written.
And I can epathize to a certain level,
so I can claim I know what that feels like - Report As Spam
- daanny22619 - 07/19/2008
- cool poem nice one
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- nelly uchiha - 07/19/2008
- very nice poem.
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- demon strait outta_hell - 07/19/2008
- Ever wonder if you made the right choice?
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