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You asked me to keep all my promises ... and I did
I promised I would always be by your side,
I promised I would stay alive,
I promised I would love you forever,
I've stayed, I'm alive, and I love you ...
But when I asked you to keep all your promises ... you never did
You promised you wouldn't leave me
You promised you would live,
You promised you would love me forever,
You left, and won't return ...
Are you still able to love me ?
No, you had broken your promises ...
So, why do I still keep mine?
- Title: Promise
- Artist: xwolfz
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Description:
a short poem about promises ...
promises can be as fragile as handling glass or looking after a young child ... we must be careful and think before we make them ... be responsible and keep your promises if you want others to keep theirs ...
-this poem is also located in my dA account as musicwolfz - Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: promise comitment
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Odd Colored Skittles - 03/30/2009
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That is utterly amazing, i hope you didn't write this from experience though........
Good job - Report As Spam
- xXRoseBerryXx - 07/18/2008
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I really like it...
i has come to the time
when it has happened
to me before.... I really
enjoyed your
piece ^^ 5/5 and
into my favorites :] - Report As Spam
- Xx-Mystra-xX - 07/18/2008
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really powerful once again...
i like the way u write
going to be looking froward to reading more of ur writing
really great... - Report As Spam
- Little-luv-hearts - 07/17/2008
- Cool poem!
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