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I cower in fear for what is and
I can not sleep without a tear
Laying on my shoulder waiting
To fall off my pillow into a
Deep surrender, covered
By darkness never to see
Her again, and yet so attatched
To a nothing in the unknown
But silently she's dying inside.
I waited for her to wake,
But no such thing happened
And then I felt where the last
Tear had dropped to the ground
And slowly I felt someting
Streaming down my face
In realization that she was dead.
Life soflty moved on and
I visited her grave often
Leaving a tear behind to
Remind her of that night.
- by Rachmaster67 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Surrendered Tears
- Artist: Rachmaster67
- Description: I just came up with it off the top of my head.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: tearsdeathdyinggravenightpillow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Max Eagle - 07/25/2008
- wow. i loved it. dark, sad, wow
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 07/24/2008
- dis is really gud =)
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- Czar Karlton - 07/21/2008
- I LOve it. Its very good. Its makin me cry a little.
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- Indicrow - 07/19/2008
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Very nice. If I may ask, do you perhaps read Wordsworth?
Also, look up my poetry if you could, yours was moving. - Report As Spam
- Fawk-A-Duck - 07/19/2008
- Nyett told me to comment on ur poetry, and it was freakin awesome but sad! D; i give u 5 stars! xDD keep on writin'! xp
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- xXxSugarCookiexXx - 07/19/2008
- Awesome poem ^-^ very touching :3
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- -Seto Hanayome- - 07/19/2008
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Ummmm.........A friend of mine/urs asked me to comment to ur poetry, and...........................that is a very sad poem!
But, nice poem. blaugh - Report As Spam