- Without you I'm falling apart. You completed and filled the gap that was there. My heart is withered, dry, and falling apart like a dying rose. No one will fill the gap in my life like you did. When you left the gap got bigger. Consuming my chest turning it into the dark void that once consume my heart. The void grows every time I see you with the girl who stole your heart away from me. The Void grows ans without you. I will die from the pain and sorrow that is consuming me inside. Without you I'm burning and dying on the inside. Can you not see it? I'm dying without you. Why do you do this to me? Don you like to see me in the pain I'm in? Do you see have you have done? Leaving me. Pull and pushing. the hatered, the pain that kills my inside. Don't you love me? Without you I'm falling apart.
- by AriesChaos |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Without you
- Artist: AriesChaos
- Description: Does everyone feel like this some times?
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: withoutyou
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Comments (4 Comments)
- dmaticic - 01/02/2009
- Nice. It reminds me of the sadness of my broken heart...
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- pinkemo-64 - 12/13/2008
- I applaud you. Great job.
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- IconicRaven - 07/16/2008
- And I think we've all felt like this at one time or another. You'll strike a key with many people. Again, good piece.
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- IconicRaven - 07/16/2008
- Great work, man. It is very detailed yet also concise, the hallmark of great writing. However, I would suggest you format it next time for better reading. Other than that, 5/5. Great job!
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