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I cannot see him,
Why do i still believe him?
I cannot feel him,
Why do i still kneel before him?
In his name, i raise my sword,
In his name, i create my fault,
In his name, i slaughter my own,
In his name, i create my doom.
All this, i do in his name,
All this, i do in vain,
Because I never did what he told me,
I never did, what he showed me.
- by Darkeydance |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Believer's tale
- Artist: Darkeydance
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Description:
Yet another poem, i wrote it because i wanted to try writing something else. It's about a believer, who finds out what he's doing is wrong.
I do not mean to offend anyone, or anything, and i will respect you if you feel offended. - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: believer tale
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Unfound Dreams - 12/16/2008
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Who cares about spelling and grammar. I mean my poems and peices aren't spelled and grammared correctly, but I still get pretty decent score. I give you an A, and not just for effort.
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- Hane no Kori - 07/16/2008
- The idea is really good. You need to fix the spelling and grammar errors, though. All the "I"'s need to be capitalized, for a start. ^_^
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- lifesux23 - 07/16/2008
- no offense to me! i think this is great, and probably true for more ppl then we know, nice job
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- Velletine - 07/16/2008
- It's very nice
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