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Someone has ripped the heart from my chest
I stand wide-eyed,
And live long enough to see
The pool of blood surrounding me.
As I fall back I think about
The times we shared,
And then before I close my eyes
I wonder if you ever cared.
Death takes her time
Before she comes to my door,
Even though I'm not breathing anymore.
Such a sharp pain,
I cannot see, nor feel, nor even be.
Why can't you see
The pain you're causing me?
When I finally hit the ground
My eyes are dim,
And my lips lie open
And mutter words
That will ne'er make a sound.
- by Dot The Magical Ladybug |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: Slow Death
- Artist: Dot The Magical Ladybug
- Description: Just something I wrote a long time ago.
- Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Penelope Difference - 06/11/2009
- Marvellous.
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- Lonely-Elena-Forever - 03/15/2009
- that was beautiful ... carry on writing !
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- Percy_TwilightWolf - 01/16/2009
- I loved it. I wrote a song so similar. That was the best Bravo, Brava!
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- Angeladr7 - 07/15/2008
- Very good. I love the use of the metaphor and expression of "ripping someone's heart out" and how you brougt it to life and used it to express feelings of betrayal.
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