- should i leave or should i stay should i live or should i die y leave me to decide my fate i will surely die but look it is to late i am now dead ihave fallen to the deepest pits of my soul waiting for u to come like an angel and save me from the darkness of my mind but u never have come threw for me u hate me but i love u while i am dieing u r at the side of my bed but u get so inpatient for me to die u shoot but it is too late i am dead but wait it is just a dream but it is my life i awake to see your face u say u love me but at that moment u lied u r a lier u hate me with the graetest hate and intensity why do u even care to hide it but i leave threw the door while i am thinking death is a privilidge so y live the life before i leave threw the door while u r not even able to comprehend that i am gone forever u cant get me back i am now dead u cry on the outside but on the inside u r happy i will haunt u forever ur life is a hell now because mine is still one
- by Lord Mega naruto |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: the angelic darkness
- Artist: Lord Mega naruto
- Description: this is my life if u do like it pm me
- Date: 07/15/2008
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- Cymbolic_Lyght - 06/17/2009
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this seems of a horror way to live, i am srry, but my way of a poem is at least have real happiness in it it should be called the angelic light, then change the poem perfect. I love the angels heaven sends me
angels surround me
but i call them friends
now there's a poem to look up to - Report As Spam
- kittypuss123 - 07/28/2008
- lol deep XD
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
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I would say this is an incredible work... but wait, it's too late. I'm already dead.
Also I'd be a liar.
I'm sorry, it pains me to say this to such a respectable Lord of the obscure "Mega" Naruto, but your fiction is subpar. - Report As Spam
- SomeAnotherDay - 07/15/2008
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Wow that's deep man. But I feel ya.
Try to space it out a bit though - Report As Spam
- cabbage_patch_doll_xoxo - 07/15/2008
- sorry looks like a paragrahp not a poem no form or structure keep on trying
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- sexey tiney - 07/15/2008
- i love it. so.... real. this peom might have inspired me to write another one of my poems. oh, before i forget to tell you, you should write poems for a pofetion.
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