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Rain in the mud,
Mud in the hair,
Hair in the windows,
Windows on the ground,
Ground on his face,
Face covered in blood.
- by Mutandanstan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/07/2009 |
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- Title: Rain
- Artist: Mutandanstan
- Description: ...
- Date: 01/07/2009
- Tags: rain blood
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Junge15 - 03/28/2009
- this makes me think of a really bad car crash.
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- dawnofthelight - 01/09/2009
- This poem is like a riddle. It seems choppy-ish, and you play with prepositions, and its like you let the reader make up his own verbs or the situation in his mind, when he tries to find out what you're trying to say. I imagine a car crash, or someone jumping through a window, and hitting his head on the floor. This poem is very simple, but very...ingenious, lets say. I like it!
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- Hopkins15 - 01/08/2009
- oh man, you are so deep and mysterious. unlike your mom. who i plowed.
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- angel of renown - 01/08/2009
- Car crash?
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- Trinityblood1045 - 01/07/2009
- whoa thats deep O.O
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