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I live in a place
Too far from your face.
Yet still my heart longs,
To sing you this song...
This song of what I call love.
some people call it true love,
Others a gift from above.
Sometimes its trying
But never dying...
This is what I call love.
On that day I see you,
I will know just what to do.
for once our lips meet,
Ohh ohh how sweet...
That is what I call love
Though we may not have meet,
I show very little regret.
Like a dove you will fly,
In my arms you will cry...
That is what I call love..
You are what I call love...
- by prettypink_kish09 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: You are what i call love
- Artist: prettypink_kish09
- Description: this is about two lovers who are very far from each other. their distance is almost half of the world. they promise to see each other someday ,when they are much mature. i hope you like it.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: call love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- jojs_97 - 12/10/2008
- that's a beautiful poem.
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- YourLovelyBear - 12/10/2008
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Wow, that's so pretty.
I wish such things could be true. - Report As Spam
- Doma Angel Of Silence - 12/10/2008
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u r great
^^
so beutiful
:')
5/5
some people call it true love,
Others a gift from above.
Sometimes its trying
But never dying...
i liked that
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- Criminal Crescendo - 12/10/2008
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i like it.
4/5 - Report As Spam
- Jasper CuIIen - 12/10/2008
- awesome 5/5
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- Only Becca - 12/10/2008
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Songs has a point. It's pretty cliched. If you want to make it better you need to fix the whole thing. The best thing I can tell you to do is to take the poem, sit down for a little bit and try to re-word every single line, except for the last one. Oh - and for the love of Gideon please delete the "...". Those are so over-used by people who have no idea how to use them.
(P.S. Rhyming love poems do not generally work out so well, given the fact that they've been completely over-done.) - Report As Spam
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