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I cower in fear for what is and
I can not sleep without a tear
Laying on my shoulder waiting
To fall off my pillow into a
Deep surrender, covered
By darkness never to see
Her again, and yet so attatched
To a nothing in the unknown
But silently she's dying inside.
I waited for her to wake,
But no such thing happened
And then I felt where the last
Tear had dropped to the ground
And slowly I felt someting
Streaming down my face
In realization that she was dead.
Life soflty moved on and
I visited her grave often
Leaving a tear behind to
Remind her of that night.
- by Rachmaster67 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Surrendered Tears
- Artist: Rachmaster67
- Description: I just came up with it off the top of my head.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: tearsdeathdyinggravenightpillow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- zahara_68 - 07/18/2008
- this is so great babe!!! I totally love it!!!!
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- 3m0azngurl - 07/18/2008
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OMFG! that was the freakin s**t! i luv that! that was freakin awesome! so sad! IT WAS AWESOME! i luv poetry too. hey want to read mine.... there kinda gay! but its Smiles Fade and Crying Out!...
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- rawrxkathrose - 07/18/2008
- This is beautiful!
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- zaynsgone - 07/18/2008
- i loved it! although i think there's a typo on your title.
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- Sharkkiee - 07/18/2008
- I love it ^^
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- Nyett - 07/18/2008
- Yay, LOVE IT! <3
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- ninja-kyoko-chan - 07/18/2008
- beautiful
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