- The girl that i love.Is somewhere above.I can see her in my mind.I'm always on her side.I'll chase her like darkness on light.She's my dream.There's a lot she means.I love her more than anything!She's more than everything.With the end of world.I know with that girl.I'll make it out alive!She's my whole life...
- by Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX |
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- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: My First Song Lyrics
- Artist: Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX
- Description: Well i always make lyrics and all so heres my first song i ever wrote about a girl i liked........so i hope you like it and remember this was only the first so please know that it won't be really good...and Thank You a bunch for reading... ^_^ oh lastly its not too long because it was my first and i didn't know how long songs were supposed to be =c
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: song
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Comments (7 Comments)
- slimjim28 - 11/29/2008
- Actually Joshua you said that u have been writing many songs and u were pretty good at it at school,so yeaahhh
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- Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX - 11/29/2008
- thanks every1 and btw pinay slim it was my 1st thats y and thank you every1
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- xbaabyknguyen - 11/29/2008
- tats a pretty good song i tryed to sing it and it went out pretty good
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- slimjim28 - 11/29/2008
- NO offense but i dont really think it makes any sense at all.
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- PHiLiP33NAY - 11/29/2008
- Ok, no offense, but some lyrics are kinda weird, like "is somewhere above." What you want us to do? Look up? And I'm pretty sure that "With the end of the world" isn't even a sentence. Other than that, it's ok. Sorry for the criticism. But, other than that, it's ok.
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- aredesu - 11/29/2008
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awww..
how sweet <3
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- Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX - 11/28/2008
- thanks sub thanks izz thanks twilight thank you all =D!
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