- when i saw you again in school my heart started to beat and beat i can feel my heart and how its in so much pain so sometime i just want you to know i love you so much i cant help it but you will never get that . my love is not the best but it true . you act like you dont care what happen between us all the time you say you love me more than anything in the world and how i believed you . i just miss calling you my caveman my TAK && my everything . sometime i wish why cant we just start all over again because this to much pain for me i just can handle this anymore ! i love you and i hope you know that - by Lisa :] aka me :] lol hope yall liked it comment and rate please thank you :]
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- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/31/2009 |
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- Title: feelings
- Artist: drama_lover101
- Description: love </3
- Date: 03/31/2009
- Tags: feelings
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Freefalling-Into-Oblivion - 03/20/2010
- beutiful... not all poems have to rhyme!! great job smile smile smile smile smile
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- -GracedWithPoetry- - 01/20/2010
- Dude! Make it in poem format! Not cool! I have to agree with cocoskitten.
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- riya the best - 11/21/2009
- this is very common writing and i did not like it also and it needs more improvement
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- Seeker-of-Justice - 11/08/2009
- Very common and needs to be in the right arena. This does not rhym nor has the rythm needed for a poem
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- Cocoskitten - 10/06/2009
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Are you trying to prove something here?
I see no true value in this writing, for many of your phrases are seriously overused. To be honest, everyone has written something like this some point in their life, be it mentally or physically.
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- Toe-Tappingly Tragic - 09/23/2009
- Conveys your feelings pretty bluntly (which is both good and bad) and it also is a little.. Cliché.. /:
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- CUNFRONTYOURSELF - 09/04/2009
- common 4 a girl
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