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I live in a place
Too far from your face.
Yet still my heart longs,
To sing you this song...
This song of what I call love.
some people call it true love,
Others a gift from above.
Sometimes its trying
But never dying...
This is what I call love.
On that day I see you,
I will know just what to do.
for once our lips meet,
Ohh ohh how sweet...
That is what I call love
Though we may not have meet,
I show very little regret.
Like a dove you will fly,
In my arms you will cry...
That is what I call love..
You are what I call love...
- by prettypink_kish09 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: You are what i call love
- Artist: prettypink_kish09
- Description: this is about two lovers who are very far from each other. their distance is almost half of the world. they promise to see each other someday ,when they are much mature. i hope you like it.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: call love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- prettypink_kish09 - 12/10/2008
- T.T^_^
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- OhhShitniz - 12/09/2008
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Kinky, Kinky. Not very original, though it does send some sort of a feeling across. I think if you revise the poem a bit, it could turn out swell smile Best of luck!
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- Desmotes - 12/09/2008
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Cliched. Best word to sum it up. It didn't DESCRIBE the feeling of love at all, just two people who missed each other, and the rhyme scheme was sickeningly predictable. Rhyming love with above is a cliche of epic preportions. Sometimes it's trying but never dying, is 2 lines that make absolutely no sense whatsoever to the story. Also Like a dove you will fly, how does that relate with the story?
I appologize, but I really disliked this poem. - Report As Spam
- venomous_bride - 12/09/2008
- i totally relate
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- iccyx3 - 12/09/2008
- it is alright not great...but just alright
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- LadyHacker92 - 12/09/2008
- shawni, why can people read our minds? (or should i ask god???) any wayss, lulz, STOP READING MY MIND!!!!!! and very good, 5/5 ^_^
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- shawnielizabeth - 12/09/2008
- OMG!! this is my new fav poem! i totally relate to it =)
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