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||Intro||
The tear in my heart,
reminds me of you.
The pain never fades,
not wanting to forget you.
But rejecting the hurt
that rails behind.
Always leaves me alone,
withering and dry.
{{Need first and second verse}}
||Chorus||
I dont know why I do,
but I run right back to you.
Pleading for a difference,
though nothing turns out that way.
Nothing seems to change,
when you act this way.
Always falling apart.
Always Running away.
Instremental soundings
{{Need ending.}}
- by Blood Written in Stone |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/05/2009 |
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- Title: Nothing Seems to Change...
- Artist: Blood Written in Stone
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Description:
The last four lines of the chorus popped into my head today durring a test on Respiratory and Circulatory systems of the body... weird how these little rhymes and lyrics seem to pop in my head during science and always during a test.
Im still working on it though... so thats why Im posting it now, for suggestions!!!!
Dont write out the parts I need...I just need suggestional words, moods, etc. - Date: 03/05/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xX-Yuki-na-Kitsune-Xx - 03/10/2009
- It looks good to me...I kinda suck at doing anything like that, so I'm not gonna even try to think up an ending...sry
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- Sakura-H-21 - 03/10/2009
- It looks great...and I'm gonna have to agree with the others, I can't really tell you how to finish it.
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- charon of the styx - 03/08/2009
- nice very nice i dont no how to finish it though sorry its just so good i dont wana mess it up maby my bro thinks of something
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- Digit4l Dr3am - 03/07/2009
- OMG!!! IM SO SRRY! I DIDNT KNOW HOY TO RATE IT, I THOUGHT U HAD TO FILL IN ALL THE STARS ONE AT A TIME, I ACCIDENTLY OUT A ONE, IM SO SRYY!! I LOVE IT THOUGH! I WAS GONNA GIVE IT A 5/5!!!!!! IM SRRY, I NEVER BEEN IN THE ARENAS, SO I DIDNT KNOWHOW IT WORKED!!
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- Everytime I see - 03/07/2009
- Nice... but I'm afraid I can't help finish it... I'd probably ruin it, lol... 5/5
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- iiPaperHearts - 03/07/2009
- The first and second verse could be something like...past events or something. 4/5
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- sgettios - 03/07/2009
- srry I meant kinda alternative sound not lyrics. pm me though, I'd love to hear more about this and maybe help if I can =3
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