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I'm Bleeding, Bleeding, Beeding
from the scar you left me last night.
Weeping, Weeping, Weeping
from the pain you give me
as i write.
A heart broken into two
now i have nothing
nothing to do with you. heart
You have hurt me
very deeply. cry
And stabbed me
several times with all your lies. stressed
Now i sit here,
thinking in a corner,
as my heart dies
and dies. heart
Till i am no more
than a simple twinkle
in your eyes. neutral
- by xxmellymelz09xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Twinkle in Your Eyes
- Artist: xxmellymelz09xx
- Description: jus a poem, sad
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: twinkle your eyes
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Death_Kitten_13 - 07/07/2009
- Thats sad but ohssooooooooo good smile 5/5
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- rose-eagels13 - 02/10/2009
- that makes me cry
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- 290DarkStars - 02/09/2009
- yah that feeling. its familiar (I JUST wrote that! OMG! I diddnt want to brag or show off... im sorry. I typewhat I say and when I said that... I kinda typed it... sorry.
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- 290DarkStars - 02/09/2009
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anyone who insults this is a screwball! This thing rocks! not only becaus I have felt a familiar pain, but because of how true it is... that after a deep cut to the chest
your own friends lay you to rest.
and you know that you cant do your best.
and you know that its no test
all your dreams just left your nest
and waddya know, yaou could have gussed,
the only one that you love holds the knife to your chest... - Report As Spam
- Dreamy Sundrops - 12/01/2008
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I like the part where it says "Till i am no more
than a simple twinkle in your eyes."
I think thats te best part smile - Report As Spam
- Fall3n_Ike - 11/30/2008
- I don't like smiley faces in poems they make it childish also the XD face in the first few lines makes no sense your XDing about a scar you have? 3/5
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- emo0213 - 11/29/2008
- good i gave it a 4
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