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As Sophia, drifted to sleep, under her age old cherry blossom tree in her back yard
she felt something yanking her hair, she woke up with a start.. seeing nothing at first, then millions of particles of amazing flakes of gold, she was then interrupted by a rude voice "OI YOU, WHAT ARE YOU DOING UNDER OUR TREE" said a very feminine voice, she was shocked at the volume of the speech though... "Who- who- who's there?" said sophia in a startled manor, "Who do you think sweet cheeks?" came the voice again, and while Sophia was trying to figure out the identity of the strange voice, she suddenly caught sight of a small winged girl,... "but, you're impossible!!" Sophia shouted, louder than she'd intended, "shhhh, big mouth, I don't want the others finding out I've come out here!!" the "fairy" hissed in a bossy way, "Are you a fairy ma'am?" Sophia asked, trying to remember all the manners she had been taught in classes with mrs martin (she was home schooled you see) "no need to be so frank, but no I'm a faery not one of those prissy pink girly fairy tale brats," said the Faery, "Oh and my names Roxanne by the way" she said, (this was a first, a faery friend) then the branched started to rustle "ROXANNE, WHERE ARE YOU, IT'S MURIAL YOUR COUSIN ARE YOU OK?" said another Faery (or so Sophia presumed) Roxanne turned a bright blue, and quickly flew toward the bird house, she then disappeared in a flash....
To be continued
- by 123Irock123 |
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- | Submitted on 04/27/2010 |
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- Title: the cherry tree
- Artist: 123Irock123
- Description: this is a short story, all about a young girls fave hang out spot, which has some pretty amazing inhabitants (part 4 of drifting coming soon)
- Date: 04/27/2010
- Tags: cherry tree
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 123Irock123 - 05/26/2010
- thanks <3
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- Moro Wolfen - 05/10/2010
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I thought this was excellently written! biggrin
the only thing, though, was at the beginning, i felt that you repeated a little too often. But that's just me razz
well done! biggrin - Report As Spam
- 123Irock123 - 04/28/2010
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omg thanks,
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- MTM9696 - 04/27/2010
- Hehe I liek it.
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