-
Chapter 9
Flashback
Annelise couldn't see anything,couldn't lift a finger,couldn't open her eyes. She could only hear everything that was going on around her. She heard crying, distant yelling, a cell phone ring, a nurse coming in to check on things. She heard all of this and yet she couldn't talk or make noise herself. She felt someone take her hand in theirs. She knew it was Riley's hand from all the times they had held hands. Her heart ached as she remembered why she had crashed her car and landed herself in this position. It was all because the boy who was holding her hand now broke her heart,turning it into a million shattered pieces. She yearned for the strength to pull her hand out of his grasp, but the strength never came to her. Distantly she heard her mother's impatient voice,"When is she going to wake up? I need to tell her the damage she's done to that car!" Annelise wanted to open her eyes and scream at her mother and tell her mother all the things that she had ever done wrong. She knew that she would have more than enough things to say about that subject. She then heard her father's voice,"She's going to pay for it,because I am not going to pay for it for her." She inwardly groaned at her father. How could he say all this while she couldn't even wake up like she wanted to? She heard Riley's voice ring out loudly,"Would you two shut up!? Your daughter hasn't even woken up from a terrible car accident,and you are already punishing her! I can't believe anyone would ever let the two of you be parents, for you have to be the worst parents I think I have ever laid my eyes on!" Annelise felt an intense emotion of love when Riley said all that. She loved that he was sticking up for her even after they broke up. She loved everything he did for her. She could almost sigh as the realization hit her. She loved Riley, and no amount of breaking up could ever tarnish her love for him.
Chapter 1: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101952141#title
Chapter 2: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101968949#title#title
Chapter 3: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101969957#title#title
Chapter 4: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101977913#title
Chapter 5: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101984187#title
Chapter 6: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101988505#title
Chapter 7: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101993793#title
Chapter 8: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102004195#title
- by breathing_is_not_allowed |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/06/2010 |
- Skip
- Title: The Void Chapter 9
- Artist: breathing_is_not_allowed
- Description: Chapter 9 of The Void. So,you all should be very proud that I finally made this chapter. I've had serious writer's block for the past couple weeks. So I hope you like this flashback. :)
- Date: 03/06/2010
- Tags: void chapter annelise riley flashback
- Report Post
Comments (7 Comments)
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 03/14/2010
- http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102037719#title <--- New Chapter. It's very short.
- Report As Spam
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/11/2010
- @ Ever Just so you know I think breathing does flashbacks every other chapter.
- Report As Spam
- Ever963 - 03/10/2010
- Your driving me mad with all this waiting please hurry up and make chapter 10. Is chapeter 10 going to be when she wakes up?
- Report As Spam
- Ever963 - 03/09/2010
- I know what you mean about writers block, I have it right now. I can't think of a thing! Great job can't wait for chapter 10!
- Report As Spam
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/08/2010
- I thought so, they just seem very cold to her and emotionless, like robots...
- Report As Spam
- breathing_is_not_allowed - 03/07/2010
- They are her real parents. When Riley said,"I can't believe anyone would ever let the two of you be parents." He meant it as like someone should have taken Annelise away after they had given birth to her or something along those lines.
- Report As Spam
- fdfdsdfdfdsa - 03/07/2010
- Those are her real parents,right? They aren't like foster parents or anything?
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
