- One time, I was all alone. Nothing to do. No one to hug. Just sitting in my room all day talking to myself, in shock with what i just saw eek . My wife, my kids, my entire family, including my parents all murdered in front of me as i looked though the window. They were killed by this, this devil of some sort evil . He didn't kill me, but i wish he did so I could Be with my whole family. But now, now im stuck here all alone. Alone Forever
- by Herosolidox23 |
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- | Submitted on 06/11/2009 |
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- Title: Alone Forever
- Artist: Herosolidox23
- Description: This is my first poem so don't judge me please and plz tell me wat u think XD
- Date: 06/11/2009
- Tags: alone forever
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Comments (4 Comments)
- alio06 - 06/29/2010
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Err...it's great for a first poem. (:
But try to make the reader think next time. Don't just narrate it, or else it'll look like a really short story. ;D - Report As Spam
- prettycaity2 - 06/27/2009
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Also If Meh Other Comment Showed Up >.<
Um,... You Can Check Out My Poems And Meh One Story If You Want To Know How To Do Somethings....LEAVE COMMENTS THANK YOU smile - Report As Spam
- prettycaity2 - 06/27/2009
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Wrong Topic D:
This Should Be In Poetry And Lyrics....Also Should Be In Poem Format....So Yeah Keep On Writing >.< - Report As Spam
- gabbwee2 - 06/13/2009
- Um i think itshouldbe i a poem format, but it is really good! very good actually. wish i could right poems, i can't i only write stories.
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