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As the thunder and lightning danced in sky the rain poured down upon her like stone, her clothes bloodied, wounds throughout her and her soul completely shattered, her heart turned to ice and her lust for blood for all those that loved grew with each breath.
Tears of agony and dismay ran down her face like water falls but to only fall on the already dampened earth. "All those that love, shall be gone." So there she went leaving the bleeding lover there to die but to live an eternity of regret.
Thats how she wanted it to be her heart was already broken in two and in stone so why should she care?
NEED MORE IDEAS PLEEZHELP EVERY THOUGHT COUNTS EXEPT NEGATIVE CRITISISM
- by mermaidgrl224 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/29/2009 |
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- Title: the hate of love
- Artist: mermaidgrl224
- Description: Some times love is hard people die but wh says that you cant
- Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: hate love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- RhageisMyGame - 07/05/2009
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Writing that comes from real life experiences is the best kind.
Thats where i get my lyrics from.
Either what has happened to me or what i think of the world. - Report As Spam
- xCIZINEC - 07/05/2009
- She's actually basing this off of an actual event that happened between us and our friend Taylor :3
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- RhageisMyGame - 07/05/2009
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Its good.
I would love to help you finish this, but what kind of story are you shooting for here?
I need a basic idea of what you want before i can help you. - Report As Spam
