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I sit near the tree ever so tall
Knowing that I'm alone
Trying to stay stiff as a stone
In an effort not to ball
He went to war
Begged me to merry him
I really did love Tim
He always wanted more
Tim's gone now
And I didn't say 'I do'
Or even 'I love you'
To my grate sadness and tears I bow
I lean my head against the door
Knowing that I'll live past this war
- by robinprewitt |
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- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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- Title: the war sonnet
- Artist: robinprewitt
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Description:
a small sonnet about the cost of war
the picture refrencing this is aloso up for judge - Date: 09/05/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -Deathly Destruction- - 04/24/2010
- This is the FICTION section of the writing arena- and this entry belongs in poetry. Please request to have it moved there.
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- caylee2345 - 03/13/2010
- i luv ur story,its the best i never red
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- Starshine2456 - 12/11/2009
- Gives a nice picture I love it
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- hazuinf - 10/27/2009
- your account has been inactive for 90 days, so photobucket have tempabanned you, so the pics not there. the sonnet is really good though. the rhyming style is really good.
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- xXworidXx - 09/13/2009
- very nice ^.^
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- kurokageryu - 09/13/2009
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love it
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- kittehhugz - 09/04/2009
- nice poem!
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