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                I sat looking at her. Wanting to knoe if her crush would say a single yes...
Her eyes smiling though her lips are still. I sat wondering if she is think about him.
Everyday, at lunch she would try to sit at a table next to his, in classes, she would do everything to sit close to him. Now...........................................................
He said no just because he likes someone else. Worst, that someone else use to be my best friend, and i know her toooo well to even go out with him. There she sat.
Tears almost coming out. Eyes blinking fast.Her hands holding on tight to her jeans.
Her heart broken. I stand there staring. Thinking how could he do that to a girl?
Couldn't the just give the poor girl a chance. Though i know the answer, a no.
as tears almost reach my own eyes. . She wiped her eyes, her hands are free from her jeans,she turn the other way, and simply a single tear went back down. Slowly as it reach her chin,another came then another. She took her sleeve and wipe some more. I put my hands on her shoulder, and said "Don't cry over him, you'll find the guy your looking for somehow, its just not him." As more tears came down. She gave me a big hug and sqeese tightly. I felt as if i was her, tears coming down also. He sat there, staring, I hope he was feeling giulty. Then he stood up and walked over to her, put his hands over her hands and said "I do like you, and i can't go out with you, because your friend's here, her "use to be" bff, don't want me to go out with you because your her friend, and only until she is not your friend anymore, we can go out." Simply those words shocked me. HOW COULD HE!? I was thinking. She raise her head and look at me.As he walked away. I sat there, there was about 5 minutes of silent though it seem liek an hour. Stunned, i said " I'm sorry. I knoe you really want him, even f it means not being my friend, go on, seeing you happy makes me happy." Slowly she said " I don't want to be with someone who don't liek me the way i am, who don't liek who i hang out with, I really do liek him, but this time betraying my friend, i can't do that."
I stood there. Not believing the words i just heard. Then the bell ran, she said "I'll see you at the end of the day." She then left. I was crying.
At the end of the day I stand by the trees, where we usually meet until our busses come.there i saw her walk out the front door as fast as she could, and faced me with a bright smile. As she walked towards me, i saw her crush and my "use to be" bff. My eyes open wide, so she turn around and saw them too. She stop short in her tracks. Teachers were looking, and so were other student. I know this wasn't going well. My "use to be" bff looked at me then rolled her eyes. The teachers saw that and was stunned. Every teachers think she was an angel, well its more of devil if you talked to me! My friends crush then said "So have you decided yet? Dumping her for me huh?" My friend was silent. She never had the nerve to talk to her crush. Then he walked over hold her by the waist, "Come on, you know you want me more than her, why can;t you just tell her that, or do you want me too?"
She nodded and i was SHOCKED. He came over to me. We were face to face, his breathing was clam ,but mine was hard. "She doesn't liek you, just leave her alone. She wants me more, don't you understand that? You just dont' want to lose a friend to your "use to be" bff here. Don't be jelous." A grin spread on his face. i stood there in front of teachers and students which were both wide eyed. sweat coming form my face, my breath grew hot, my face turning red, my hand sqeesh into a tight fist. My friend tears rolling down was shaking her head, I dont' know what she meant so i ignored it mostly from what she did to me. My fist tighten, Then i let it go, and took my hands and pull his shirt coller up to my face. " Listen you bastered!!! I doesn't matter to me , who lieks me and who don't, my friend can betrayed me all her ******** wants too, but its doesn' mean im going to go around and be your ******** slave!" As i said slave the black kids jaws dropped. I let him go and went over to my "use to be" bff. " You might be the angels in every boys eyes but not in mine! The teachers might liek you more, but they just don't know the ******** little brat that you are inside!" After all that, I turned around and walked away. I heard him say "See baby it's not that hard?" My friend than screamed " DONT'!" I turned around wanting to see what she wants next. She punch him in the face and ran towards me. The teachers and student were still, even though he was on the ground. " I'm sorry!! I didn't mean to!' She came up to me breathing and panting like a dog. As he sat up, he ran to her and shouted " YOU MADE ME DO ALL THAT FOR NUTHIN! WHY YOU LITTLE b***h!!! FINE IF THATS THE WAY YOU WANT TO BE THAN BE THAT WAY!!!" She stood there, face hot, panting even more, and scream her head off" NOOOOOO YOU BE THAT WAY!!! IM NOT GOING OUT WITH OSMEONE WHO DON'T LIEK THE WAY I AM OR WHO I HANG OUT WITH! YOU MIGHT HAVE THE LOOKS BUT YOU DON'T HAVE THE HEART TO MADE A GIRL HAPPY! SO f**k YOUR a** AWAY FROM ME. IF YOU SAID YOU DON'T CARE THANLEAVE, BECAUSE IF YOU DO CARE THATS WHY YOUR STILL HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I fell to the ground. My friend would never have the guts to do that. But she did, fur me. She turn around and help me up. He and my "use to be" bff were stunned. As he ran away, she stood there, saying " Look what you done." "I wouldn't be tlaking." i said back. My friend then turn and gave me a big hug sqeesing even tighter this time. I stood there watching her run away. " Thanx you" said my friend. "no thanx YOU" I replyed. And i returned her hug. We stood there huging and crying, kwoning each one of us will be there for the other, during our hard times. 
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        - Title: Best Freinds
 - Artist: XX_im_a_viet_angel_XX
 - Description: I might have some words spelled wrong or just plain messed up, but im really not a great speller. This story is about something that is based on real life. Dating, going out, that sort of stuff. I hope you like it!
 - Date: 08/30/2008
 - Tags: best freinds
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		- A-Silent-Friend - 04/05/2009
 - t was okay need a bit more pratice and use microsoft word or something to write it down on first then have it fix up spelling and grammer,you should also try to make more diolege in the story itself even if it's a thought bubble which should have this {symbol,but your writing does have potential, and i mean alot of potential and i am a writer myself so if you want a few pointers just send me a pm
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- enmortem - 02/07/2009
 - Idk what to say. You need a lot more practice as a writer and maybe a good story line. Keep tryin....
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- Tsukiryu09 - 01/21/2009
 - Good Moral to the story...however, the writing needs to be improved. I myself am not the perfect writer but I do know when writing stories even if it is online, using things like thanxs and things like that just takes away from the story unless it is used in dialogue with texting or instant messaging. Then I think it makes it look more realistic. Keep writing and practicing you'll get better.
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- lalaland2106 - 08/30/2008
 - the bearer of bad news. your story sucks. It has no point that i can find, you didn't exsplane very well, and the text talk just makes you seem like a blonde who only knows how to spell that way.
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