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I sit near the tree ever so tall
Knowing that I'm alone
Trying to stay stiff as a stone
In an effort not to ball
He went to war
Begged me to merry him
I really did love Tim
He always wanted more
Tim's gone now
And I didn't say 'I do'
Or even 'I love you'
To my grate sadness and tears I bow
I lean my head against the door
Knowing that I'll live past this war
- by robinprewitt |
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- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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- Title: the war sonnet
- Artist: robinprewitt
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Description:
a small sonnet about the cost of war
the picture refrencing this is aloso up for judge - Date: 09/05/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- harukanightwarrior - 08/21/2009
- it's sad, but really good, sadness makes it even better//
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- torn_between_two_worlds - 06/25/2009
- its really good
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- ArsenicArsinoe - 06/18/2009
- Very nice.I liked the theme and the way you wrote it,but your spelling...Other than that I liked it.
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- xxcrazyy_lokitaxx - 06/08/2009
- good
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- Screamo-Techno - 05/30/2009
- that was totally awesome and sad but awsome
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- AnimeQueen51 - 05/12/2009
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Damn people whats up with you and spelling?!
Maybe thats just they way people like to spell! Ever think of that?
Anyway very nice job! =)
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- Chief Vanpier Bella - 05/09/2009
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REPORT AS SPAM BIG TIME!
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