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I sit near the tree ever so tall
Knowing that I'm alone
Trying to stay stiff as a stone
In an effort not to ball
He went to war
Begged me to merry him
I really did love Tim
He always wanted more
Tim's gone now
And I didn't say 'I do'
Or even 'I love you'
To my grate sadness and tears I bow
I lean my head against the door
Knowing that I'll live past this war
- by robinprewitt |
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- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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- Title: the war sonnet
- Artist: robinprewitt
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Description:
a small sonnet about the cost of war
the picture refrencing this is aloso up for judge - Date: 09/05/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- AngryRefinedSugar - 04/19/2009
- how sad.....but your a great poet good luck
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- ii-MidnightAngel-ii - 04/13/2009
- i agree with rocky
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- Rocky Kenpo - 04/03/2009
- very nice
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- 00Genious - 03/20/2009
- The spelling is a problem, but I'm pretty sure that the structure and rhyming are well. Good job.
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- Emmiiiii - 03/18/2009
- Yeah, it's ok, but like other people the spelling really annoyed me, if you misspelled the words on purpose you really need to say that in your description
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- twilek_jedi - 03/13/2009
- The poem was nice, but the spelling got in the way.
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- QuinceyComatose - 02/16/2009
- wow that was depressing
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