- Title: Tainted Twins chapter 1 pg1
- Artist: VampLW
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Description:
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note- shyla is kind of childish since i wrote the story when i was 13
also....i HATE grammer!!!!! DX - Date: 12/05/2009
- Tags: tainted twins chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Love Lotion - 01/04/2010
- I do think you have a skill with manga type thing. But there is a few things that need to be fix. But that would come with experience. 4/5
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- VampLW - 01/01/2010
- ah ty, i try my best XD and lol yeah grammer does suck!!!! XD!!!!
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- Angelic Nikki_44 - 01/01/2010
- I don't see any bad grammar xDD And I love it. It's so cool ;P BTW... GRAMMAR SUCKS!!! WHOOOOO!!! ;]
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- VampLW - 01/01/2010
- ty ^^ yeah there is some harsh critics here but oh well wut can u do right
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- Gaurdian-Angel-Of-Death - 12/31/2009
- wow.. harsh critics.. i actually love this. despite that its in the wrong arena.. i could care less lol. love the twin idea.. ^_^ and for being 13 when writing it... it amazed me hehe.. nice work ^_~ hope we can be friends~
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- HellCatHaru - 12/20/2009
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Wrong Arena
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- Shayruda - 12/16/2009
- tbh i liked how it began but it got confusing. The art is good especially in the second picture.
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