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  • Letting her hair down
  • Title: Letting her hair down
  • Artist: Little Mongoose
  • Description: I had to revise this drawing. I tried cleaning up the lines as much as possible, because that's what most of you said I should do ^^. I also added the lighting effects and smoothed out much of the shadings/highlights.

    I think it improved, at least a little bit.

    edit: Keep in mind still that this was only the second drawing I had ever done on Photoshop. I originally drew the character (not familiar with the layers yet) so that is why the background is so simple. I had done the entire pictu
  • Date: 03/25/2004
  • Tags: streetfighter
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Demon-Layana - 06/07/2007
  • Her cleavage is a little bit too high and her ear
    is too small. Rule of thumb; the bottom of the ear
    usally is aligned with the bottom of your nosest
    and the top of the ear is at "T" of your nose.
    (Where the eyebrows are sepreated and the nose
    goes in between those eyebrows.)
  • meiphesto - 06/01/2007
  • try and talk about exactly what you like about the
    picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
    background?

    if you are critiquing, start with
    something you like about the picture, then mention
    specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
    too long, eyes are too big).
  • sunshinehearttrob - 05/27/2007
  • her eye has no color. creeps up and down my spine.
    ick. love everything else though the chest looks
    weird with the cleavage showing but just one big
    lump for the boobs. so do something bout it.
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