- Title: Trying to look good
- Artist: dalis
- Description: This character is Dalis, the very first original character I ever drew mostly. He's been through a lot of changes, along with the second character, Zana. It took me awhile to get started on this drawing because I haven't drawn guys for awhile, but I'm pretty comfortable with how this picture came out. Also posted on the wall is a pencil sketch of Zana I did awhile back. Dalis is a character from the Lithea series, Resistance.
- Date: 10/08/2003
- Tags: othersoriginal
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Comments (7 Comments)
- RiseUpAndDie - 01/02/2008
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try and talk about exactly what you like about the
picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
background?
if you are critiquing, start with
something you like about the picture, then mention
specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
too long, eyes are too big). - Report As Spam
- linear109206 - 12/11/2007
- pretty cool art.!!
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- startling112053 - 12/04/2007
- Sweet!
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- Zenaku Jeriah - 11/27/2007
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The eyes seem off proportion with the rest of the
face.
Other than that, the picture is great. - Report As Spam
- Photosoph - 11/27/2007
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Wow, very nice. I like the black and white tones,
the clean linework and colours, and the pose. Very
nicely done. smile
You've done some nice shadow
work, especially on his neck, but some
cell-shading or other type of shading might help
bring him out a little more too. smile Just a small
suggestion. - Report As Spam
- bulletwitch_1 - 11/27/2007
- Awesome~
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- la_mas_loka - 11/19/2007
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so cute so hot so pretty!!!!!!10/10...!!!looking
good!!!!!! - Report As Spam
