- Title: Splash
- Artist: Cherubim
- Description: Shirasu Ayumi. She's one of my original characters. I'm not very happy with the final line art quality in this one, but I enjoyed shading in this style so I thought I'd drop it here.
- Date: 11/09/2003
- Tags: anime
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Fido the Cat - 03/04/2007
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Well, the sketchy quality in art has become kinda
popular these days, but i think you should've
spent more time on the hair. Hair does not move in
unison, especially the shorter locks, they should
be curled in the opposite way and if her hair's
wet some of it should be kind of clumped together
and some should be stuck to the side of her face. - Report As Spam
- chachabumbum - 03/04/2007
- Comment for gold!
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- Banned-Reporter-MOD - 03/03/2007
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try and talk about exactly what you like about the
picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
background?
if you are critiquing, start with
something you like about the picture, then mention
specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
too long, eyes are too big). - Report As Spam
- nekokid2000 - 03/03/2007
- O RLY? kinda good!
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- i_like_cheez - 03/02/2007
- hair and hands look fake.
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- Gaaras__demi_demon - 03/02/2007
- 'wolf whistles' NICE
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- anoagmxj - 03/01/2007
- well... pretty amazing woot
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