- Title: Splash
- Artist: Cherubim
- Description: Shirasu Ayumi. She's one of my original characters. I'm not very happy with the final line art quality in this one, but I enjoyed shading in this style so I thought I'd drop it here.
- Date: 11/09/2003
- Tags: anime
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Comments (7 Comments)
- teresaaaaaaa - 03/30/2007
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try and talk about exactly what you like about the
picture; is it the hair? the eyes? the
background?
if you are critiquing, start with
something you like about the picture, then mention
specifically what you don't like. (eg. the hair is
too long, eyes are too big). - Report As Spam
- Chiida - 03/27/2007
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well done, very well done. watch though, her
connections with the head and neck. it looks more
like it's just been stuck on. >_< just some
<br>critiqueing there. Otherwise you have much
potential - Report As Spam
- masonbox - 03/27/2007
- quite colorful
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- DandB - 03/25/2007
- good job, love the hair
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- SilenceDemon - 03/25/2007
- hehe very awesome!
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- I_eat_cheese - 03/25/2007
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very cute - the body shape is a little bit off.
you need some work on preportions - Report As Spam
- shadow_rui - 03/25/2007
- it is good
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