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  • Title: Hinoto
  • Artist: ammoniium
  • Description: I wanted to draw her because she had pretty hair but I think I went a bit overboard >_<
  • Date: 01/20/2004
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  • Alienor Kaze - 10/12/2006
  • PART 2: Also, I'm not sure about the back parts of
    her hair. Are they supposed to lie flat on the
    ground or are they supposed to be swirling about?
    Because somehow, if you intended to draw her hair
    flat on the ground, those curls in the back
    shouldn't be there. If you want her hair to be
    flowing about, you need to push it a bit more; as
    in lift it off the ground a bit more. Other than
    the extraneous strands of hair in the picture, and
    the lack of line quality
  • Alienor Kaze - 10/12/2006
  • PART 1: She was very beautifully drawn, and I love
    her outfit. No, I don't think you went overboard
    with her. In fact, I think you went a bit under
    the table with this drawing. I guess I'm just
    saying this because personally, I'm an artist who
    rigorously stresses on line quality. But if you
    put that much effort into the hair like you did in
    this picture, you need to play up the rest of the
    drawing. She just looks very flat and boring.
    Actually, she looks sort
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