- Title: Ryonin vs. 50mm
- Artist: Ryds
- Description: Comic page made for the admin/moderator contest. My best comics strip page ever done
- Date: 11/14/2003
- Tags: comics
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sexy Mamacita101 - 04/28/2007
- cute
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- XHisagixxHisanaX - 04/26/2007
- ...
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- ikkio - 04/23/2007
- great job!
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- Tallulah_87 - 04/22/2007
- aah the poor ducks sad
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- Lady Zoe - 04/21/2007
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As a major in cartooning, I must critique.
You
have too many out-of-panel things gong on. It
confuses the directions in which the viewer should
be looking. For example, the duck, flying out of
panel one. It leaks into the panel below it, and
there is a struggle in determining whether I
should go to the one below it and ignore the
panels to the right or not.
I think if you got
rid of the first flying duck and the second,
bloody duck, this comic would be - Report As Spam
- Starlightwind - 04/20/2007
- LMAO.
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- Tsetse-e - 04/20/2007
- La~~~~me.
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